You make some good points in your case study and integrate some theory into your writing. T: 1. Remember that Levi Strauss didn't write about music videos specifically - he wrote about narratives in general. T: 2. Proofread your work - avoid sentences that sound academic but don't really make sense e.g. 'In this shot,Khalid and his friend are shown holding watergunsin a waythat looks‘posy’or ‘gang-like’,thisfullydeconstructsthe ideaof actual guns,or evenweapons,tomake gangsseemcommonforgrandees'
You make some good points in your case study and integrate some theory into your writing. T: 1. Remember that Levi Strauss didn't write about music videos specifically - he wrote about narratives in general. T: 2. Proofread your work - avoid sentences that sound academic but don't really make sense e.g. 'In this shot,Khalid and his friend are shown holding watergunsin a waythat looks‘posy’or ‘gang-like’,thisfullydeconstructsthe ideaof actual guns,or evenweapons,tomake gangsseemcommonforgrandees'
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