This is a detailed and thoughtful post. Well done for studying a range of aspects of your video and for exploring connotations of the techniques you've used. You confidently use media terminology. T:1. I'm not convinced that your music video is stylised (think Grand Budapest Hotel) or surreal (think Salvador Dalí) ... so you need to change your comments on the first slide. 2. You have a habit of writing academic sounding sentences that don't actually make sense. Please proofread carefully or get one of your friends / family to read through your work before you post it.
This is a detailed and thoughtful post. Well done for studying a range of aspects of your video and for exploring connotations of the techniques you've used. You confidently use media terminology. T:1. I'm not convinced that your music video is stylised (think Grand Budapest Hotel) or surreal (think Salvador Dalí) ... so you need to change your comments on the first slide. 2. You have a habit of writing academic sounding sentences that don't actually make sense. Please proofread carefully or get one of your friends / family to read through your work before you post it.
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